The writer of this example has made two incompatible choices. Looked
in the dependent clause takes the sentence in one direction with regard
to time, while can see in the main clause takes it in another.
How
we correct the problem depends
on what we mean.
Correction #1: When we look closely, we can see the logo.
(This
correction takes its cue about time from the main
clause. The modal can supports the present tense, which is
sometimes
used to indicate an on-going
or stable condition. This correction means "Everytime we look in this
way,
we have the ability to see
the logo."
Correction #2: When we looked closely, we could see the logo.
(This correction takes its cue about time from the
dependent clause. Looked is past tense, and the modal could
supports
the past tense. This correction
means "When we looked at a given moment in time, the logo was what we
saw."
Check the following resources for useful practice material: 1) Guide to Grammar and Writing, 2) Colleen Hildebrand's UCI Correction Symbols with hyperlinks.
For more about verb tense, see the LARC Electronic Writing Center Grammar Checklist.